She was soaked and miserable, and he fixed that. She's happy, she's grateful, and yeah, she's going to smile at him, and it gives him a warm fuzzy feeling. THAT'S what I'm trying to get across. I don't think that it is her response that is the problem, so much as the description of it.
It didn't strike me as being
It didn't strike me as being terribly "Kasarah".
I don't think that's the problem, so much.
She was soaked and miserable, and he fixed that. She's happy, she's grateful, and yeah, she's going to smile at him, and it gives him a warm fuzzy feeling. THAT'S what I'm trying to get across. I don't think that it is her response that is the problem, so much as the description of it.