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Update, 2013/05/08

I've added some more to the starred WS&S document, in Google. Please pitch in your $0.02 as to how Noldar reacts to Kasarah's last line... (:

"Will that be sooner, or later?"
"What wine best compliments the flavor of chaos?"
"Chaotic, clever and beautiful. I like the recipe."
"And if I want seconds?"
"Kiss me now, you mad, impetuous locksmith!" (-;

You are a complete and utter doof!

These would all (except for the last line), be great for somebody who ISN'T Noldar. I can't actually picture any character I've ever written saying the last one, as I'm sure you intended. Anyway... 1,3, and 4 are all too flirty for Noldar, at this stage of his life. 2 could be read as either flirty or not, but if delivered in a non-flirty manner, it still makes reference to the luxury of wine, which would probably draw more attention to class differences than he'd like, here.

I don't know that making a reference to wine would necessarily point out a class difference. Certainly commoners enjoyed it as well?

Certainly, but it's likely that commoners rarely have the monetary freedom to make a distinction between the many different kinds of wine.

That's really what I'm getting at. Wine is classy, right? (:

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