"Will that be sooner, or later?"
"What wine best compliments the flavor of chaos?"
"Chaotic, clever and beautiful. I like the recipe."
"And if I want seconds?"
"Kiss me now, you mad, impetuous locksmith!" (-;
These would all (except for the last line), be great for somebody who ISN'T Noldar. I can't actually picture any character I've ever written saying the last one, as I'm sure you intended. Anyway... 1,3, and 4 are all too flirty for Noldar, at this stage of his life. 2 could be read as either flirty or not, but if delivered in a non-flirty manner, it still makes reference to the luxury of wine, which would probably draw more attention to class differences than he'd like, here.
"Will that be sooner, or
"Will that be sooner, or later?"
"What wine best compliments the flavor of chaos?"
"Chaotic, clever and beautiful. I like the recipe."
"And if I want seconds?"
"Kiss me now, you mad, impetuous locksmith!" (-;
But you already knew that...
You are a complete and utter doof!
Interesting, but...
These would all (except for the last line), be great for somebody who ISN'T Noldar. I can't actually picture any character I've ever written saying the last one, as I'm sure you intended. Anyway... 1,3, and 4 are all too flirty for Noldar, at this stage of his life. 2 could be read as either flirty or not, but if delivered in a non-flirty manner, it still makes reference to the luxury of wine, which would probably draw more attention to class differences than he'd like, here.
I don't know that making a
I don't know that making a reference to wine would necessarily point out a class difference. Certainly commoners enjoyed it as well?
Certainly, but it's likely
Certainly, but it's likely that commoners rarely have the monetary freedom to make a distinction between the many different kinds of wine.
I wish there were a like button for Thomas' post
That's really what I'm getting at. Wine is classy, right? (: